A healthy launch

Today our school went to the hall and we made a sandwich for free. The ingredients were ham, cheese, lettuce, cucumber and carrot. The teacher gave out the food, all the children were noisy.

The food was donated by PaknSave Glen Innes. The sandwich was  good and my friends were acting weird especially Lasalosi.  After that the little kids went back to their class but as for us we had to tidy up, and then Mr Naidoo said, we are going to do a healthy lunch again,. I can't wait for next week to make a healthy lunch.

Speeches

We have been learning to write and present our speeches. We had to persuade the audience to think our way. The Olympics was our theme.
The criteria we had to use to write and present our speech included, an introduction, delivery, content and our conclusion.

In my introduction I caught the audience's attention  because some of them liked rugby. My speech was about rugby. I am learning to write powerful words. On Friday there was some children who had to read their speech. Tan- Charlie looked nervous when he went up to present his speech. He was reading his speech fast, this made it hard to understand. I really liked Blade's speech because there was houmour in it.

In my  conclusion I  should have put powerful words in my speech because some people were not interested.